User:Pcharlotte/Cajun music/Mathieulalie Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

pcharlotte


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pcharlotte/Cajun_music?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cajun music

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

There is little written in the sandbox, so there is not much to review. I think the information is presented in an unbiased way. However, perhaps the part about complaintes could be its own subsection? Additionally, the second sentence talking about the violin, fiddle, and clarinet is a bit awkward and reads as a run on sentence. There should be more sources, but the one listed is relatively recent, and Ancelet is a fantastic resource for this article.