User:Pchokshi0612/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Suzanne Cory
 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead helps introduce the topic in a good way by including the major aspects of her life. It is a good length and includes the proper information to introduce her as a person. The content itself is organized well and includes relevant information to the scientist. The information is written in an unbiased point of view. The references could be more updated, due to the fact the most recent source used was from 2014. The references look like they are all from reliable sources though. There is not any media in the article, which could add to the article. There is room for improvement and updates in the sections of the articles, specifically in the research and awards part. She may have been given more awards or participated in more research, but the page has not been updated


 * Sources
 * https://www.science.org.au/news-and-events/news-and-media-releases/academy-fellows-awarded-2019-csl-florey-medal

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Dolichol
 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead of this article was very short in length and could have included some additional information about the topic to transition into more in depth information. The rest of the article is on the shorter side but is organized well. The sections are split up well and provide different information about the topic. It would be interesting to add information from the journal article on the effects of mutations in Dolichol metabolism to the journal article to show its effects. The point of view is very neutral and has no persuasive tones to it. The information seems like it could be updated since the most recent source is from 2013. The references are from a variety of reliable pages and journal articles. This article would benefit from some visual images of the molecule to better visualize it when learning about the molecule. It would also be helpful to provide images of pathways it is involved with.


 * Sources
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4281381/

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Suzanne Eaton
 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead provided a good introduction into the article, but it could have been slightly longer. Her significant research projects that she was known for should be included in her lead to help people become better introduced into the article. The organization of the article was well done. There could be a few more sections added under certain sections, such as research. More information about her research would be beneficial and her variety of research could be broken down under the broad category of her research. This article has reliable sources and has been updated with more recent sources just a few months ago. A picture of the scientist along with helpful diagrams to go along with research explanation would add to the article. The article is written in a neutral tone and has good grammar.
 * Sources
 * https://www.mpi-cbg.de/en/research-groups/current-groups/suzanne-eaton/projects/morphogen-signaling/

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Binding Immunoglobulin Protein
 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead of this article is done well and provides a good amount of information about the topic. The article has lots of valuable information and is broken down into many different organized sections. There is a large variety of information, and all sections have an adequate amount of information. There are numerous reliable sources as well. The sources are pretty recent, but updated sources could add more important information about the topic. There are a variety of pathways that this protein is involved in and visuals may help explain these pathways better. There are a couple of new research articles involving this protein's function in a variety of clinical areas, like arthritis. This information may be beneficial to add to update the information on this page.


 * Sources
 * https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1002/acr2.11060
 * https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1201971219300414

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Nocodazole
 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead includes important information and introduces the topic well. It is a simple article with just one main section. The section has a lot of good information, however I think this article is lacking other information. This drug has been tested to see its effect on cancer cells and if it could be a potential cancer treatment in the future, so I think this is important information to add to this article to further the knowledge contained in the article. The page was updated recently, but its sources are not as recent as its edits. Updated information along with additional research with the drug would add to this article. The sources that are cited for this article are reliable source though from scientific articles. Some visuals may also be beneficial to this article to show this drug's effects.


 * Sources
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/20399776
 * https://academic.oup.com/carcin/article/20/7/1161/2733511