User:PeaBrainC/GA Review Notes

Infobox
Speciality - Emergency medicine. Should be Respiratory Medicine or pulmonology if we're going for a US style

Complications - ...hemothorax. Can't be a complication of itself, surely?

Prognosis - usually good. Needs to be more specific

Lead
The term is from hemo- + thorax. - explain

Symptoms include chest pain, difficulty breathing, and rapid breathing. Probably doesn't need rapid breathing as well.

If treated, prognosis is usually good, even it complications arise. Even if... and should be more specific

Signs and symptoms
Try to avoid bullet lists if the text can be expressed in prose form

Causes
Not sure if the categorisation into traumatic and non-traumatic is really working. How about further mention of other iatrogenic causes such as following pacemaker implantation, or chest drain insertion.

Spontaneous hemothorax or hemopneumothorax may be occur with endometriosis, if endometrial tissue implants on the pleural surface, then bleeds in response to cyclical hormonal changes in menstruating women. May be occur? Explain what endometriosis is first

Mechanism
...are separated by a thin layer serous fluid. …thin layer of...

...resulting in dypsnea and tachypnea. Misspelt. Try to use non-technical terms. "shortness of breath" is better than dyspnoea.

Management
Need to mention fluid resuscitation +/- transfusion.

Surgery - citation needed

Prognosis
Needs to be more specific. Citations needed.

Complications
Need to mention shock.

Usually they can be treated too. How?

Images
It feels like the gallery contains too many similar CXR images. What is the image of a hemothorax in an animal? What species?

Wikilinks
Overlinking. Remove duplicate links to chest tube, tube thoracostomy, empyema, dyspnoea

Christian Medical College, Ludhiana
Christian Medical College, Ludhiana

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