User:Peanutdoll/Li Yu (director)/Curiouscat21 Peer Review

Lead
The writer has not written or improved on the already existing lead about Li Yu, so I would assume that they are satisfied with it summing up their article. If they were to add to the lead, it could include a brief description of the article's major sections.

Content
The content the writer has added is relevant as the original Wikipedia page only has a section on Li Yu's directorial career. The writer adds a section about Yu's personal life and early life and career development. The information presented seems up to date. The article deals with a female, Chinese director, so deals with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps. Furthermore, the writer articulates Yu's presentation of a lesbian relationship in her film Fish and Elephant , which the original Wikipedia page does not explicitly say.

Tone and Balance
The content added is neutral and does not try to persuade the reader to one opinion of Yu or another.

Sources and References
The writer uses a range of English and Chinese sources and are thoroughly referenced throughout the article.

The author could include a bibliography to provide more information about why they chose the sources they did.

Organisation
Overall the article is well organised.

Perhaps it would make more sense to put the 'personal life' section before 'directorial career'. You could even split up the directorial career section more to add a section about the director's techniques/form/influences because this section is the longest.

Overall Impressions
I enjoyed reading the article and it has made me want to check out her films as a result - it was really informative and well-researched.

You could improve by adding Wikipedia page links to words such as Weibo and the film and festival titles.

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