User:Peanutdoll/Li Yu (director)/NeonAfterlife Peer Review

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(Peanutdoll)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Peanutdoll/Li_Yu_%28director%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Li Yu (director)

Evaluate the drafted changes
General Notes - First off, great work! You've spent an appropriate amount of time on each section, with lots of really good references. I think the context you added in the Directorial Career section, specifically about Lost in Beijing" was really interesting.

Content - The Early Life and Career Development section does a great job of both introducing Li Yu and explain a bit of why she creates the films she does. The Directorial Career section adds a lot of information the original article is missing, and goes into more detail about what Li Yu was setting out to achieve with her films individually. The Awards section does a good job in adding Li Yu's more recent awards. The Personal Life section does a really good job explaining who Li Yu is, away from the camera.

Tone - Neutral. You accurately display facts without showing and personal biases.

Sources - Lots of great sources. All seem to be up to date and reliable.

I'm looking forward to reading the finished article!