User:PedB03/Aquaphobia/Kucharczj Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

PedBo3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:PedB03/Aquaphobia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aquaphobia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Consider adding more information to the article. Maybe something about the correlation of aquaphobia to other disorders? This might be a difficult topic to research but try finding something that is not covered in the article yet. The article talks about the cases of aquaphobia in the US and Iceland but what about other countries? Maybe you could find more specific about different races being more vulnerable to the disease than others (just how our textbook does).

I like that you added heading for 'treatment' in your sandbox. I think this information would be very valuable and it is a great addition to the existing content. Your evaluation of the article seems very accurate, personally I have heard about aquaphobia before but found very limited information on this topic. I wish you the best in your research and you are off to a great start!