User:Pedro.torres26/Neurobiological effects of physical exercise/David Torres Montalvo Peer Review

Reviewing  Pedro.torres26

User:Pedro.torres26/Neurobiological effects of physical exercise

Content

The Content added by the editor is relevant but it’s to short of an edit but is still is up to date.

There is still a lot of content missing because adding two sentences is progress but not a huge one.

I think the article does deal with one of Wikipedia’s equity gaps because it brings to the table a topic not often used nor talked and one that is important to talk about.

Tone and Balance

The Content added is neutral and not taking sides of if it is good or bad to do exercise it only shows the research made on the topic.

There is one viewpoint that is underrepresented and is the why doing aerobics exercises promotes executive functions.

Also the content attempts to persuade the reader in favor of doing aerobics and exercises in general can help you in you behavior in the daily basis.

Sources and References

The reference used in the article works, is current and it does reflect the literature so you can look at the data in the link.

Organization

The content is concise and easy to understand because of its well written explanation.

The content does not have grammatical errors but is a little off in the organized section because of its short edit

Overall Impressions

The Content added made the article a little bit more explained and it still needs work to be in its complete form.

There is still no strengths because of the lack of information but if it had more information and some images it would help the articles quality.

Overall evaluation

The content in the article even tho is short and needs a lot of work, it has the potential to be a big article and get to its complete form.

If the editor adds images it would help the reader understand some points of views.