User:Peerdrew12/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Apple Inc.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose Apple Inc. because I am fascinated by their innovations and success. Apple Inc. matters because they are advancing technology everyday and they the world's biggest tech giant. I thought the article was very informative as I learned so much and things I had no clue about. It was really organized and straight forward.

Evaluate the article
I believe the lead section was great. It gave a brief summary of the company. The lead section did not have any information that wasn't covered in the article and it was straight forward. The content of the article is relevant to the topic as it only included information about Apple. The content is up to date for the most part as there were some topics that hasn't been updated. For example, the senior management section hasn't been updated since March of 2021. I do not believe there is content missing as the article hit all of the main points. The article was very neutral as it only give facts and information. There were no points that appeared heavily biased and the article wasn't attempting to persuade anyone. All of the facts in the article are backed up by reliable sources and they are thorough. The sources are current and they are written by a diverse spectrum of authors. There are currently 373 source links for the article. After clicking ten links, they all brought me to different websites which corresponded with the article. I think the article was well-written as it was easy to read and follow. I did not see any grammatical or spelling errors. I also think it was well-organized as it was broken up into sections that reflected the major points. There were a lot of images that helped me get a sense of what the article was mentioning which I really liked. Each image had a well written caption that included links to other articles and they all adhere to the copyright rule. On the talk page, people were just giving suggestion on things to edit. This article was not part of the any WikiProjects. Wikipedia discusses this topic as an informal reading by giving factual information about Apple. The strengths of this article includes being well written and organized. I learned a great amount of fascinating information about Apple that never knew. I really enjoyed reading it. I think this article could be improved by updating some of the information, but other than that it was great. Overall, I believe this article was well-developed because of how well it was organized and how it was well-worded which made it pleasant to read.