User:Peighton0831/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Tie Signs

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have always thought that the way two people can fall in love, and build a lifelong relationship to be fascinating.

Evaluation of the article
Tie Signs  are symbolic for showing there is a relationship between two people. Tie Signs can be seen as holding hands, kissing one another, or even being in one's close proximity. These signs can oftentimes be used for fellow outsiders to read the relationships status and or situation at the time.

The term was created by Desmond Morris and perfected lated by Erving Goffman.

Evaluation

Content - Includes a strong introductory sentence, that is straight to the point, yet informative. The information is straightforward and easy to understand, because the term has not varied from when it was last edited. However, there has been a amount of time, I think the content needed to understand what one is looking for, is on this page.

Tone & Balance - This article is neutrally posted, as it is read more as an essay than a personal essay. This article was informative, not making the reader feel they had to choose one side or the other.

Sources - Included valid, research bases evidence that backed up the multiple peoples postings o further clear the information that. they are trying to get across.

Organization & Writing Quality - I personally think that the article could be a bit more descriptive,, but overall the reader gets a good undertstanding overall.

Images - The article only included five photos, which may seem like a lot but not in this case. There were more icons and ancestry pictures, where I think adding more images of pinky rings and pinky promise, holding hand, and kissing would better explain what Tie Signs really are.

Talk Page - Could not locate ?

Overall Thoughts

I think that this was a well-written post made on what exactly Tie Signs are. Once reading the article I felt positive on the subject and as if I knew that basics of what the post what trying to teach me. By simplifying words, and making things not so long the reader is more likely to focus and not loose attention as fast. Additionally, I think that more information could be posted, and that the images chosen could be a bit more clear for the readers imagination as it is more of a seen thing than a doing thing. I felt educated on this topic, however the information could be added to be a bit more clear.