User:Peiyu Wan/LGBT culture in Chengdu/7ommybo1228 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Peiyu Wan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Peiyu%20Wan/LGBT_culture_in_Chengdu?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * LGBT culture in Chengdu

Evaluate the drafted changes
The reference part is missing a title. The author added the lead. The original article has been written in great detail in the lead section. The content is relevant to the topic. It is easy for the viewers to understand. I see you have added the background section and three more sources to the original article. The sources are relevant and reliable. All links work and they reflect the available literature on the topic The tone is neutral and unbiased. There are no claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position. I suggest you could try to add a few images about the culture since there is no any images so far, such as the gay/lesbian bars, some cutule activities, etc. The organization is good, author can create more sub-sections such as achievement, story, key leaders, bars, etc. to make the page more organized.