User:Pejotaele/Milagros Correch/Busya97 Peer Review

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Pejotaele


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Your lead sentence is good, it introduces the subject in a neutral and clear way and gives insight into what the article will be about. For the following section, I would use the title "Career", it is provides the most clarity in terms of the upcoming content. I learned a lot when reading this section, it really give insight into how Milu's career evolved. I think you might need to add a bit more citation though ex. "Correch enjoyed painting" needs to be cited or "the character that symbolizes Don Quijote's motive for all his crazy erran adventures". I would over cite rather than under cite just to be safe. The artwork section shows that Milu is an accomplished and globally recognized artist. If you have time I maybe would list the mural/city/year in a table it might look a bit more crisp.

I think you do a good job of keeping your tone neutral and I feel that the article flows well. I wonder if she has any notable awards... maybe this could be another section.. although not crucial. I also think you cite good sources.

Good Job!