User:Pelang5115/Germplasm/Krhagan Peer Review

Dear Pelang5115,

Germplasm

What an eloquently spoken young lil lad, overall I thing that the added sections are written very well and add much needed information. The only issue is that the format is a little off: just remember to make sure your Headings are the ones with the line underneath and I think it would also greatly benefit the article to add hyperlinks.

for example:

Germplasm Regulation
and ...

National Genetic Resources Program

another thing that may help improve the article is add a small

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