User:Pelang5115/Germplasm/Madisontate1 Peer Review

Dear germplasm author,

The first paragraph was good, the only part I would edit is where the articles say "etcetera" after gene banks, you should take that out and just end the sentence.

Germplasm Regulation

 * Hyperlink things like NGRP, GRIN,NPGS or words that would be found in Wikipedia.
 * Number of species addition is good!
 * In addition,
 * and shared, take out "then"
 * was altered
 * "A major issue in the selling of germplasms is the lack of compensation to the donor countries"

Germplasm Storage Methods

 * live cells/tissues THAT can be preserved
 * and cryopreservation

Conservation Efforts

 * hyperlinks
 * good bullet points
 * good paragraph

additional source
Merritt, David J., et al. “Ex Situ Conservation and Cryopreservation of Orchid Germplasm.” International Journal of Plant Sciences, vol. 175, no. 1, 2014, pp. 46–58. JSTOR, https://doi.org/10.1086/673370. Accessed 23 Mar. 2023.

This source could help you broaden your area of cryopreservation and ex situ conservation.

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