User:Pelayo.omar/sandbox

'''Being bold on Wikipedia is important. '''

=PEER REVIEW=

Hello, Omar. I cannot seem to find your article draft in order to review. I did look over your assigned article, though. I was wondering if in the 4th sentence this is opinion based and maybe should not be there ("and defining them non-controversially has consistently eluded the greatest of minds.")? In the 2nd paragraph the last sentence, is this speculation? I'm wondering if that is an appropriate sentence for Wikipedia(?). Another thing you can look into is the references. I clicked on a couple and I am not sure about all of them. The 2nd reference listed seems to lead to a webpage for a free e-book(?). I'm also not sure there are enough references for the length of the article unless highlighted words leading to other Wiki-pages are considered sources or references(?). I hope if you haven't already started on this that my observations will help. Colenyj (talk) 19:41, 10 May 2018 (UTC)