User:Pelton98/Russna Kaur/Cstanton19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pelton98


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Pelton98/Russna Kaur


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Lead Section:
- Good start on stating who Russna Kaur is and some brief facts but it is a little short and could have some more information for the Lead section.

- I would like to have more information on the other sections in the article in the lead section to help connect the content with the leading sentences.

What are you planning on adding?
- Are you planning on expanding on the career section as it seems a little empty as from what I've gathered her career is a big part of her life now.

- I would also look at expanding the art section and adding more links to her art work itself and discussing some specific art works. You briefly mention some works in the small square section near the top and I would bring those artworks you mentioned into the art section as well.

- It seems that her cultural identity is a big part of her practice so you could create a section dedicated to her cultural identity and how that plays a part in her art work.

- Adding an art work of Russna Kaur could help enhance the article and showcase the work she does and add a visual element.

Keep in mind for a new article:
- Having some more sources will help with the credibility of the article and the importance of this page.

- The sources links all work but they all seem to be exhibition reviews or closely related to the artist, try and find some academic sources that are more neutral on discussing the artist. (I know this might be difficult as Russna Kaur seems like a relatively young artist who does not have any written work done about her.)

- Good use of keeping the article concise and easy to read so far and linking the article to other wiki pages, continue to do this when adding more to the page.

Overall thoughts:
- I think the article does a good job of keeping the content neutral and you have created a well organized page that is easy to comprehend. At this point just keep adding as much sources and information that is relevant to the sections that are a little bare to help fill them up so we can learn more about this artist and what she does.