User:Penelope Sky/Cell sorting/Klandry2001 Peer Review

10/29 peer review
10/19 peer review by Kameryn Landry

Hi Pauline-

There are lots of interesting topics in your contribution, however there are a couple spots that confused me. I am unclear on the definition of what cytogenics is. The diagrams are very helpful in understanding what FACs and MACs methods are. One thing I think you could add to give more information would be where and when the study on rats was done. You stated that it was completed in 2018, but not much further detail. Also, did the study show that transplanting photoreceptors is able to cure complete blindness? Or just near-blindness such as myopia? Another definition that was unclear is on neural progenitor cell lines. Does this process contribute to treatment of neurological disorders?

Overall I think your contribution was very well written, without any spelling or grammatical errors.