User:Penn1992/Atypical anorexia nervosa/Telisep Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Penn1992


 * Link to article you're reviewing
 * Atypical anorexia nervosa

Lead

 * Includes an introductory sentence which clearly and concisely describes the article's topic - nice! The article is overall quite concise which is great.
 * The lead appears to be missing a brief description of the article's major subsections though. Perhaps consider including a sentence at the end of the lead that goes something like: "This article will review the signs and symptoms, treatment options, diagnostic criteria, prognosis, and epidemiology of atypical anorexia nervosa."
 * Consider moving the last paragraph to right after the first sentence of the first paragraph since this might improve the flow of the article.
 * Each sentence includes a relevant and quality citation as needed - nice!

Content

 * Content added is relevant to the topic. I like the photo you added regarding psychiatric and metabolic traits associated with anorexia nervosa! Concise and informative caption.
 * The first paragraph in the "Signs and Symptoms" section should be moved to the "Prognosis" section, since discussing the complications of anorexia nervosa is more related to prognosis rather than signs/symptoms.
 * Consider embedding links to other Wikipedia articles throughout the "Signs and Symptoms" section, such as "Halitosis", "Insomnia", "Anemia", "lanugo" and "Somatization" since some laypeople may not know what those are and might be interested to read more about those respective topics.
 * There should be a space between the second and third sentences of the "Treatment" section.
 * Throughout the "Treatment" section, "AN" and "AAN" should be consistently spelled out or explained somewhere else in the article that those stand for "anorexia nervosa" and "atypical anorexia nervosa" since some readers may not know what those acronyms stand for.
 * At the end of the first paragraph, "referring syndrome" should be changed to "refeeding syndrome". Consider embedding a link to the "Refeeding syndrome" Wikipedia page as well.
 * Consider either spelling out what "SSRIs" stand for, or alternatively embed a link to the "selective serotonin reuptake inhibitor" Wikipedia page.
 * The third sentence of the "DSM-5 Criteria" section has the phrase "eating disorder" misspelled as "eating order" and should be corrected.
 * The "Prognosis" and "Epidemiology" sections seemed neutral and balanced - love them. Great job!
 * Recommend removing a comma in the final sentence of the "Epidemiology" section so that it reads, "...in the normal or overweight range, as well as the perception..."
 * Overall, the sources you used appeared fairly recent, credible, and were mostly secondary sources which is great. I am a bit weary of citation [10] because it is a New York Times article - not sure if that's an acceptable primary source. Perhaps someone on the Wikipedia staff could provide more guidance on whether it is up to Wikipedia standards; I'm honestly not sure. It looks like a very interesting article though!
 * All cited links work - awesome!