User:Pennyseilyon/Social Media Language Learning/UOWils038 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pennyseilyon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pennyseilyon/Social_Media_Language_Learning?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social Media Language Learning

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello,

Thank you for sharing your additions to the social media language learning article. Your additions are clear, easy to read, and neutral in tone. By creating new sections and adding information on formal and informal uses I find it easier to understand compared to the previous version. I did go through and correct some very minor formatting/grammatical issues. One area that was a little light is the Formal Use section, you may want to build on this if you have the time. The addition of the further reading section is very beneficial for those looking to expand their knowledge on the topic. The article is missing media, so a photo may be an idea you wish to explore. Your sources are all from credible publishers/journals and have been published recently. Overall, I think you've done a great job. Thanks.