User:Percys0818/Phantom eye syndrome/Fassbender0128 Peer Review

General info
Percys0818
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Percys0818/Phantom_eye_syndrome?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Phantom eye syndrome

Evaluate the drafted changes
I honestly think that the added portion, which is the treatment section, is very detailed and informative. The fact that it wasn't there beforehand is the biggest shocker but since it's not a commonly known syndrome, it needed more information added. After thoroughly reviewing the section, I see no issue or huge imperfections in the section. The only thing that's being flagged is the word "nonpharmacologic". I would just suggest putting a dash in the word (non-pharmacologic) just so it isn't flagged by Wikipedia but nothing flagged me as concerning or needing any adjustments. It's a very informative addition to this article which fits the format and tone of Wikipedia.