User:PericlesIsMyWaifu/Gorgo, Queen of Sparta/Superdeadpatroclus Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

PericlesIsMyWaifu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:PericlesIsMyWaifu/Gorgo, Queen of Sparta


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gorgo, Queen of Sparta

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

I think the lead is good! I might say a little bit more about her personal significance as Queen of Sparta, because the lead is mostly her relations to other people. I don't know if you meant to remove the picture of the bust that supposedly depicts Gorgo, but I do think an image of her would help if possible

Article Structure

I think the structure is good and I like that you reduced the number of superfluous sections. I also like the additions to the Marriage and reign section, as well as the adorable Leonidas bust!

I do think I would keep the popular culture reference section, because that seemed important.

Coverage Balance

I think the coverage is thorough and even across the article. It sounds like some of the additions about her education are a bit speculative so maybe trim those down a little bit. Also the Plutarch quote about giving birth to real men is used twice. I liked the addition about how the word queen wasn't applied until later, and I would've loved to hear more about what her role specifically was, but i understand that may be hard information to find.

Tone Neutrality

I think the tone is very neutral, and does a good job of always saying "according to" when making judgement statements.

Sources

I think the references are really good and I love that most of them are linked to publicly available sources!