User:Perryk86/Réunion Creole

Article Draft
Reunion Créole is the unofficial language spoke on Reunion Island. [this seems like it is already in the introduction section, they call it the "vernacular" which means the same thing, so not needed].

History
Reunion Creole was first developed on Reunion Island, [again this seems like it is already there too, not needed] [perhaps put his after what is already in the history section?] First referred to as Bourbon (the name was changed into La Réunion in 1848). [there was a quote here, so was this a direct quote? unclear], if not put a citation - inline citations are very important on Wikipedia and it's not clear which article you are referenceing the Bollee one?]. Include citation with the cite button above (see tutorials if not clear). [deleted this sentence as it was repetitive of the original intro]

Geography

Located in the Indian Ocean, to the East of Madagascar, this French-based Creole was developed through the colonization of the Reunion Island. Reunion Creole was formed when European settlers [who specifically?] came to the Island ....[add more here as the previous sentence didn't make sense and include a citation].

'''Contemporary Usage [it seems much of what you originally included was already here in the intro section. If you can add a sentence with a reliable source on this topic that would improve the article a lt].'''