User:PersianaAmericana23/Stockholm Alhambra Vase/Sioch Peer Review

General info
PersianaAmericana23
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:PersianaAmericana23/Stockholm Alhambra Vase
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) Very well written, doesn't stray into extraneous information, good job with connecting all/a good chunk of the related articles. Also the lead is a very concise summary.
 * 2) perhaps adding a description section describing the object?
 * 3) Keep doing what you're doing, don't forget about adding the end date to the vase's stay in Drottningholm Palace.