User:Petermu9s/Ambulatory care/Bhello14 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Petermu9s


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Petermu9s/Ambulatory_care?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Petermu9s/Ambulatory_care?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Lead
The lead is concise and clearly describes the article's topic.

Content
The content added under safety, personal and medical education and telemedicine is current and relevant to the topic.

Tone and Balance
The added content is neutral and of the correct tone. The author does a good job of describing concerns and advancements.

Sources and References
The new content draws information from reliable, peer-reviewed secondary sources of information. There are a few dated sources but they are balanced by more current ones. All the links tested are in working order.

Organization
The content is very well written and easy to read. The two added sections are logical additions and well organized.

Images and Media
Based on what I am able to view, it does not appear that any media or images have been added.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?

The content added has improved the overall quality of the article and has made it more complete. The added sections on Safety and Personnel/Medical Education modernize the article. In terms of further improvements, perhaps some sort of image or media might make the article more vibrant.