User:Petermu9s/Ambulatory care/Gammon-m Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Petermu9s


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Petermu9s/Ambulatory_care?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Ambulatory care

Lead
It is hard to see what has been updated and what hasn't, since the original article has been updated with the new content.

The lead includes a concise introduction with a clear description of Ambulatory Care.

The lead also includes a brief description of most of the major sections. Adding a mention of treatments could make this section stronger.

Any information not present in the article is linked to another wikipedia article.

Content
The content added is relevant to the topic and updated the article with Covid-19 related information. This addition was an important update for the article to be current.

All of the added content seems to fit well with the existing article, with no obvious gaps or missing information.

This article was a good choice to add/edit as it was short and missing updated information (like the Covid-19 information).

Tone and Balance
The content added stays neutral and does not seem to be biased toward any particular position. The viewpoint is informational and straightforward.

Sources and References
All user added content is well researched and backed up by reliable sources. The content remains neutral and accurately represents the source.

There are a variety of sources that reflect important information relevant to the time period. (ex. newer sources for Covid-19 information and slightly older sources for other information).

Added sources include peer reviews and are well-established.

Links work.

Organization
The content is well-written, and meshes well with the previous content. Not distinguishable from new content to previous content (author voice is neutral and straightforward).

Overall grammar and spelling looks good, no obvious mistakes or errors.

Sections are well separated and decisive, each including relevant and informative additions.

Images and Media
Images included fit well with the written content.

Captions accurately depict what is in the image.

Overall Impressions
The content added improved the article, in particular by adding relevant information regarding Covid-19.

All of the content added is backed up by strong sources, and links to other important wikipedia articles are helpful for diving further into the topic.