User:Peterorfanos/Technology policy/Brooke.baker873 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Peterorfanos
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Peterorfanos/sandbox

Lead

 * The lead has good information about some events that technology policy influenced
 * I might suggest adding a brief overview of what technology policy is
 * use more straight forward language

Content

 * All of the content added seems to relate well to the topic.

Tone and Balance

 * all of the content is neutral, but I think you can change some language to sound less like storytelling and more informational

Sources and References

 * All of the sources are credible
 * maybe add a few more

Organization

 * headings or section titles might help the readers to better follow the article

Images and media evaluation

 * N/A

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * N/A

Overall impressions

 * The content added was relevant information
 * work on organizing and keeping with an academic tone