User:Petitee/Polycystic ovary syndrome/MariferL Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Petitee


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Polycystic ovary syndrome
 * Polycystic ovary syndrome

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

-Concise description on the causes, prevalence, definition, signs/symptoms of polycystic syndrome disease

- There should also be information on its management, diagnosis, treatment and prevention

Content

- I think that there's info missing on the History section

- On the Definition section, I think that the NIH, Rotterdam, Androgen Excess PCOS Society are more criteria rather than definitions and could fit better on the Diagnosis section

- I like that the info on Standard assessment and Glucose tolerance testing is with bullet points

Tone and Balance

- I believe that the article has a neutral tone

Sources and References

- In the environment portion of the Causes section, there are a lot of citations for just 1 sentence

-Sources are current

Organization

- The article is easy to read

images and Media

- Add 1 or 2 images on the Signs and Symptoms section