User:Petvyli/GATA transcription factor/Yayinruan Peer Review

General info
Petvyli
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Petvyli/GATA transcription factor
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * GATA transcription factor:
 * GATA transcription factor:

Evaluate the drafted changes
The quality of writing for the drafted changes is good; the writing is clear, concise, and have no grammatical errors, which gives the readers a good understanding of content. The content added to the Wikipedia page is relevant and important as it provides context to function of GATA transcription factor in organisms and how each subclasses of GATA transcription factor contribute to the development of tissues. The editor also included information relating to the molecular structure of GATA transcription factor, which is pertinent to understanding the biochemistry function of the enzyme. The sources used are all scholarly articles that come from peer-reviewed biochemistry or biological journals, which indicate the information are reliable and relevant. There are many sources used, which indicated a very thorough literature review was conducted to create the edits. Some area of improvement is more usage of linking relevant information to other wikipedia articles such as linking ectoderm to its wikipedia page, as this can be confusing to readers who are not well versed with these terms. Another area of improvement include adding a picture of molecular structure of the GATA transcription factor's zinc finger in the article if the image is available on the internet.