User:Peytonmk/Effects of meditation/Grahamal Peer Review

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peytonmk
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Evaluate the drafted changes
I think editing that fist sentence to clarify that while this mediation was used by Buddha himself, the practice is increasing in the present. You proved a better definition of this type of mediation rather than going right into the research, that provided me with a better understanding of it. For the research that you mention and that the original article it seems to provide a neutral state as it provides the positive effects but also mentions the limitations. Overall, I think that you are going into a great direction for this article and I see how your contributions will improve the article. I think it could benefit by adding more research examples to the subtopics such as the pain, it does seem like an interesting concept but the original article does not elaborate or provide as much research for that.