User:Peytonmk/Effects of meditation/Lizmtay Peer Review

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Peyttonmk
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Peyton, this is amazing! Your contribution is abundant.

The change of the definition was an excellent choice. The addition of "As such, it is one of the most ancient forms of meditation. The practice aims to and increase a sense of awareness of the present moment. The practitioner becomes a quiet observer of their thoughts, emotions, and sensations; allowing them to come and go without passing judgement" really expands on its definition and is more informative than "is a component of Buddhist practice."

I really like how you included a study on the Vipassana mediation approach and went into its depth rather than saying "this is what it was and this was the results." Maybe include the limitations of the study as well?