User:Peytonmk/Effects of meditation/Zclayt Peer Review

I really liked the amount of references that you chose to use in your sandbox. I was not able to tell and differentiate between certain parts of your sandbox concerning your article body and your lead paragraph. I think that you could maybe label or separate these two parts from each other. I also noticed that you blotted and marked out a lot of your work within your sandbox and personally I would have completely deleted these comments because your reader is still able able to view the changes unless they were peer review edits and then in that case, I see that as the expectations to leave the revisions. Some of your work is also bolded in the text and not typed in the same writing as the rest. I would make changes there as well.