User:Peytonpjccooney/May Sybil Leslie/CKphys Peer Review

Peer review responses / comments (to be clarified / turned into a paragraph below):


 * There are currently no edits or planned edits in the sandbox
 * There are a few distracting grammatical / punctuation errors or missing words.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)