User:Pgress/Golf course/Alv5269 Peer Review

General info
Pgress
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Golf course
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Golf course

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

More citations are needed that actually work.

The introduction needs more development and more key sources.

More information is needed on the effects of golf courses on the environment. Update this information as well because these effects may have escalated or become less harmful over the years.

There also could be more information about the management and ownership off golf courses.

Maybe adding more information about a course's signature hole. Is that what attracts people to certain courses?

Overall, it is well structured article, more information just needs to be added and cited!