User:Pgunter99/Alcohol abuse/Chanda10 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

PGunter99


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Pgunter99/Alcohol abuse


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Alcohol abuse

Evaluate the drafted changes
The link for source 1 was active and working, however I had difficulty finding the working link for source 2 so I can't confirm the validity. Your draft was breif. I think it would help if you included some of the original article literature right before your edit, then maybe bold or italized your addition so we can could read some ofthe original entry into your edit. I do think that section is well versed and will be a succesfel addition to the article. Definitly find a better way to add the hyperlink for source 2 though so it can be confirmed as a valid source. ~chanda