User:Phalliday47/Central venous catheter/Maryhan17 Peer Review

Lead

 * I like the broad overview of the scope of central venous catheters that you provide
 * I wonder if breaking up the Lead paragraph will make it more visibly digestible to the reader
 * Great job on going through a large amount information in a concise manner

Medical uses section

 * Impressive job on entirely reworking a large paragraph


 * I liked the way you display the information in a list format. It helps to easily visualize the information
 * I suggest adding in more hyperlinks to other wikipedia articles in this section as there are a large number of complex medical terminology
 * Tone is neutral and balanced

Catheter Flow section

 * Great job on identifying a need for a new section
 * I like how you summarize the equation in a descriptive paragraph including the rationale for central catheter design and function, placing the equation in context.
 * I would consider breaking down the last sentence in the section into several sentences for clarity.

Peripherally Inserted Central Catheters (PICC) section

 * Great idea including this section in the article, as PICC lines are a very important and closely related topic
 * I like how you describe the pitfalls and indications for PICC lines in a clear and concise manner, incorporating previous topics like catheter flow
 * I would consider breaking up this paragraph into 2-3 sections for ease of visualization