User:Phil the Human/Winners Don't Use Drugs/Lll84 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Phil the Human


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Phil%20the%20Human/Winners_Don't_Use_Drugs?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Winners Don't Use Drugs

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I do not know if you are aware but the existing article is very similar to yours. it is not clear to me if you are working to add to the current article. If so, a lot of the information gathered by you is the same as in the current article. Besides that, you have made good use of citations as well as linking key terms to their respective pages. the article seems neutral, providing information without taking a stance. the documents you have used as references seem to be good sources on the matter. however, i would recommend to provide some new information in order to improve the existing article.