User:Philipphaku/Confidence interval/BadEnding Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Phillipphaku


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Philipphaku/Confidence_interval?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Confidence interval

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Some good formatting edits in the 'Approximate confidence intervals' section that definitely improve readability. Also, I noticed that multiple credible citations were added, which is definitely helpful for this page which was lacking sources.

I may be wrong, but the added section about the central limit theorem seems out of place when in the context of determining confidence intervals, especially because in the body of this section, confidence intervals aren't discussed at all. I suggest either removing it or maybe adding more detail about how it relates to confidence intervals.