User:Phoebewolf/1811–1812 New Madrid earthquakes/Jfmaloney Peer Review

General info

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1811-1812 New Madrid earthquakes, edited by Phoebewolf, JS4472, Katelyn Amoss and Olivia-felton


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Phoebewolf/1811%E2%80%931812_New_Madrid_earthquakes?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 1811–1812 New Madrid earthquakes

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think it is a great idea to include a section about the aftermath of the earthquakes. In the actual section itself, it should be mentioned that it is about the initial earthquake mentioned earlier in the article that happened on December 16 because the article is about the series of earthquakes. Just a little clarification would be helpful for understanding. In discussing the damages and affects of the earthquake, it might be beneficial to include the total cost of the earthquake and damages that happened.