User:PhrameSeek/Edward Burtynsky/Bkcoms Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

PhrameSeek


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:PhrameSeek/Edward Burtynsky
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Edward Burtynsky

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Lead is PhrameSeek's sandbox is an update to the current version of the article.

The sandbox currently provides an introduction, as well as two new separate subtitles: Early Life and Education. The content that PhrameSeek has added to the current version is relevant and well-written. The new subtitles are well-organized. The content is concise, clear and easy to read. The overall tone of what PhrameSeek has written is neutral.

The citations provided make the article more discoverable, however two of the citations (#3, #4) have "Check date values in: linked in red. I am unfamilar with coding through Wikipedia however I assume there is a break in the hyperlink to be fixed.

This is a good article and I feel as though PhrameSeek has provided relevant information where the article needs it.