User:Pichaudhary/Discrimination/Paramdeep1313 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
As indicated by the growing number of states contemplating or passing laws to address it, it is evident that the issue of discrimination based on vaccination status is becoming more important. Both scholarly research and legal developments appear to support your idea to add a paragraph on this topic to the Types of Discrimination article.

A balanced approach would be helpful in addressing this suggestion, taking into account the reasons in support of anti-discrimination measures related to vaccination status as well as any opposing opinions, given the significance of accuracy and impartiality in Wikipedia articles. This could entail taking individual rights and autonomy into account in addition to information regarding the possible public health advantages of such policies.

Here is an example of how you could phrase the suggested subsection:

3.13 Discrimination Based on Vaccination Status:
Discrimination based on vaccination status pertains to the unequal treatment of individuals or groups. This is especially relevant when it comes to public health initiatives, employment, education, and the ability to obtain goods and services. Throughout the COVID-19 pandemic, this type of discrimination has gained prominence as authorities and establishments attempt to strike a balance between safeguarding public health and preserving individual liberties.

Legislative Progress
Several countries, including the US, have passed laws prohibiting discrimination based on a person's vaccination status. Some states have proposed legislation that would make it illegal to discriminate on the basis of COVID-19 vaccination status, such as Tennessee and Montana.

In conclusion
The conversation around vaccination-based discrimination highlights the intricate interactions that exist between the goals of public health, individual liberties, and cultural norms. In order to solve this complex issue, careful discussion and policy creation are still necessary as research and legislative initiatives continue to change.

Aim Of This Draft
While noting the complexity and conflicts surrounding the subject, this draft seeks to offer a thorough review of the field. To ensure the suggested addition is finalized, it would be helpful to get input from other Wikipedia editors and take into account any additional thoughts or viewpoints they may have.