User:Pickleboydyl/Critical Media Effects/Laurenmyerson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pickleboydyl


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pickleboydyl/Critical_Media_Effects/Laurenmyerson_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is nothing written yet, so he needs to begin with writing the lead