User:Pickles and Jupiter/Draft:Aubrey Spencer Escoffery/Historysarah Peer Review

Great article! I found some spelling errors and have directly edited those, but it may be worth another read through to check for errors. I think the article has really solid content. One note- Wikipedia requires the citation to be outside the period at the end of the sentence, rather that inside. Additionally, I think your article could use more in-text citations, even if you are simply re-using citations. I think they recommend for every paragraph to have at least one citation. I have only minor edits, great job overall!

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)