User:Pickles and Jupiter/Draft:Aubrey Spencer Escoffery/Snazzy780 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pickles and Jupiter


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 * Aubrey Spencer Escoffery


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Evaluate the drafted changes
I really enjoyed reading this article! Nice job!

Lead: The lead might benefit from more information summarizing what is covered in the whole article. I think Wikipedia also likes to have the person's name bolded the first time it is written so that might help with publishing. I might also highlight why Escoffery's work was vital to the history of psychology.

Content: The content looks great, but there were a few typos. I'd just recommend cleaning them up. Otherwise, the information was really interesting!

References: The references look like good, reliable sources, but it also looks like you have several duplicates of the Roberts reference. Was that a mistake?