User:PinkGator12/Phyllida Lloyd/ScrambledLegz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

PinkGator12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Phyllida Lloyd


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Phyllida Lloyd

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great article! I like the side picture with the main information about Phyllida Lloyd, it is concise and works well within the piece. One thing that could use improvement is the main piece of text in the article. If you could split that information up and organize it under a few headers it would make the piece a lot easier to follow and stay connected with opposed to a long section of text in the middle of the article. Nice work so far!