User:Pinkballoon224/Daniela Conde/Pinkballoon224 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Daniela Conde


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://chicanaart.blogspot.com/search/label/2021FCondeDaniela


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sendy Santamaria

Content:
== The added content is relevant to the topic as it provides biographical information about the artist and an overview of the type of work the artist pursues. The content is up to date. There is a lot of content missing as there should be more of an exploration of the artist's most famous pieces and more details as to why the artist creates the art in the first place. The article needs to be more specific. For example, the article says "Sendy Santamarias' art features themes such as migration and the everyday lives of working class communities. Her work also centers on Xicanx culture as well as the narratives of Latinx and Xicanx communities." The inclusion of specific examples of work that are encompassing these themes should be presented to the reader. The article does deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps and historically underrepresented populations as the artist is Chicanx and not well known. ==

Tone and Balance:
== The content added is neutral and not heavily biased toward a particular position. There are no viewpoints that are overrepresented or underrepresented as the article is written in a straightforward way. The author does not attempt to persuade the reader of anything. Sources and References:   There are no journal/scholarly sources in the references section. This being said, I am not sure if the new content is backed up by reliable secondary sources. The information does reflect what the cited sources say. Given that the content within the article needs to be supplemented with more information, there needs to be more sources added to this wikipedia page. The sources are current. The authors of the sources are not clear. I think a trip to the UCLA library is needed to supplement the sources. There are no linked sources within the text. In text citations are needed. ==

Images and Media:
== The article includes one image of the artist, but discussions and pictures of the artist's work are needed in this article. The image of the artist is not found on Wikicommons, but labeled to give credit to the photographer. New Articles:  The article is supported by 2-3 sources that are separate from the artist, however, I am not sure if they are reliable as they are not scholarly sources. The list of sources is relatively short and should be expanded upon. The article is extremely short and should add additional info boxes and sub headings to expand upon the artist's work. The article does not link to anything. ==