User:Pinkballoon224/Felicia "Fe" Montes/Nayeli Playas Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pinkballoon224


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pinkballoon224/Felicia_%22Fe%22_Montes?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Lead
In the template provided by the professor, she has the artist's name and the art that they are know for before the Bibliography. Not sure if you decided not to include that or forgot to include it.

Content
The content presented in the biography section contains a lot of great background information on the artist. However, I noticed that there is little to no information on when and where she was born.

Tone and Balance
The content in your article is neutral. I didn't see claims that appeared to be biased, any viewpoints that were overrepresented or underrepresented, or any persuasion techniques.

Sources and References
You seem to have a pretty good range of references. Your work seems to be cited properly. All the links seem to be working.

Organization
There seems to be no grammatical errors. I think adding Sub-headings would make your article easier to follow. Everything seems to be under Felicia Montes. Adding sub-headings would make it appear more organized and clear for an easy read. However, it's still organized well.

Images and Media
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