User:Pinkflamingo22/Biological basis of love/Olefinder Peer Review

General info
Pinkflamingo22, Pinkpenguin17
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pinkflamingo22/Biological_basis_of_love?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Biological basis of love

Evaluate the drafted changes
Looking through both the bibliography and sandbox pages, I would recommend a few changes. Overall, the bibliography looks good. Sources are cited correctly and and list the purpose of their placement. I would look into the sandbox changes. While the addition of information brings new ideas, what section would it be placed into the wiki? Signifying a place for the information would help signify what order of events the wiki occurs in. I also didn't see the original sources but just the new ones.