User:Pinkfrog22/Interquartile range/Ziyanggod Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) Lead Section

The writer pinkfrog writes a great independent Interquartile range wikipedia. She precisely described the definition of Interquartile range. Different from the wikipedia of Interquartile range that everyone can see. She describes the definition in a context, making it easier for readers to construct an image in minds. Because she describes the every concepts with context, her writing content is without doubt very concise. She refers to all the sub-title in Interquartile range, and add her own understanding and fully description about the meaning of each dimension of the boxplot. Although it may read useless for experts, but very comprehensive to the starter.

2. Article

She also pays average effort to each paragraphs. She is good at using examples to help explain the application of Interquartile range in different kinds of situations. She uses good passive voices and no grammar mistakes. One of her table is even accepted by the wiki and show up in the main page. Afterall she did great job.

3. Existing articles

actually there is some repetition about the same things. She can consider about make it simple.

4. Conclusion

This is an elaborated edition and still need some improvement on repetition problem.