User:Pipertownsend/sandbox

Slow Food Article Critiques:

One section of the article that I found distracting was the piece on the past publicity efforts of Slow Food. I felt that the information was not as pertinent to the article.

Another section that I thought could be expanded upon was the objectives. I appreciated that all the objectives of the movement were stated but I felt that they could all be more in depth instead of a single sentence.

Food desert Article Edits:

- redundant footnotes are stated as a cleanup problem on the article page.

- a merge between the Food desert article and Food desert in West Oakland has been suggested.

- look for any spelling or grammar mistakes/any sentences that could be edited.

Carrying Capacity Article Critique:

This article could be expanded to cover more information. I feel as though it has a shallow exploration of carrying capacity and could have more topics covered rather than just the factors that govern carrying capacity and the ecological footprint.

Fenceline community Edit:

- Norco, Louisiana could have a link inserted to the Norco, Louisiana Wiki page.