User:Piratekingjay/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(History of anime)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(I chose this article because I have a fondness of anime but had no idea the history of it or where it came from, It matters now due to the cultural impact anime plays on Americans and their youth. So finding out its historical impact would be the next best step. My preliminary impression of it was that there was a lot of information but the sources don't seem all that credible)

Evaluate the article
The lead section did its job the reader can very quickly identify what the topic is about, one major flaw in the lead section is that is doesn't give descriptions of the articles major sections. The lead had a decent amount of information that wasn't further explained in the article. There's also a handful of information in the lead section that was explained very briefly. The lead is concise and not overly detailed but you could use the help of the article to make it more sound.