User:Pisawagner/Teratology/Doni Devi Thingujam Peer Review

General info
Pisawagner
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Pisawagner/Teratology
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pisawagner/Teratology?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Teratology

Evaluate the drafted changes
I reviewed your sandbox draft of the article “Teratology”. It was very structured, to begin with the editing.

The initial draft of the article appears promising, with each section outlined clearly. The inclusion of links within the article enhances its readability and accessibility for readers. So far in editing, two teratogens such as lead and vitamin A have been included and a few points on alcohol in teratology have expanded to the article, ensuring that it meets the desired standards.

The article maintains a neutral tone throughout, which is commendable. However, certain sections could benefit from additional elaboration to provide clarity, especially for readers unfamiliar with the topic. Incorporating more links to key terms can enhance knowledge and help readers to understand the information better.

Also, the editing seems to be partial as there were subheadings without any discussions.

Overall, good job was done by the group. Please continue working on the edits outlined in the sandbox.